Another old Forever 16 remake - and this is actually my third take on this scene! My first color drawing of Abby was way back in 2007 [link] , and I mentioned I wanted to introduce her in a story where she falls in the school swimming pool and needs to be rescued. But I've reworked that story a lot since I first thought it up - now, instead of her shoelace getting stuck in the filter, she sinks to the bottom under the weight of her backpack. I drew that just last year [link] , but I've revised Abby's character design yet again since then, so I thought I'd do one more update. Plus, I'm a lot more proud of this pose, which I think does a better job of conveying a sense of weight on the poor girl's back.
As for her gallant rescuer...well, that'd give away the ending of the story, wouldn't it?
Comparing those two previous works to this one really shows how far you've developed your arts, characters and storytelling. Colour me impressed three times!
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Considering the weight of my backpack, this seems like it would happen to me... thank god our school doesn't have a swimming pool...
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Great job Barboza! Tomorrow happy birthday to you Barboza! God keep alive you happiness, love and health. Then later I was doing you a birthday present!
That's why they say, "Pack it right, pack it light!!"
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~*Aarie: Hey, what are you doing with those photos!? Juni: Err... nothing, nothing! Aarie: Hand them over, nyaah! Juni: Eep! (*runs off with Aarie in hot pursuit*)*~
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Oh and I already know she gets rescued by Joel, so I won't bother calling Zoey in.
Zoey: -_-... Aw nuts. Really was looking forward to saving the day.
Me: Eheheh...
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"I reject your reality, and substitute my own."
-Adam Savage
"That is the sound of forgiveness. Screaming, then silence"
-Carl the Llama
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happiness, is it truly something we can find in this world or is it nothing more than a fleeting dream we are doomed to share? you decide....
Tomorrow happy birthday to you Barboza!
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Keep the good writing and drawing.
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~*Aarie: Hey, what are you doing with those photos!?
Juni: Err... nothing, nothing!
Aarie: Hand them over, nyaah!
Juni: Eep! (*runs off with Aarie in hot pursuit*)*~
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